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I tried writing a song with voices and lyrics, but when it came out i didnt like it. I did however like this one instrumental section that I had included, so I made it its own song.

It's supposed to be an atmospheric song, and I had a specific atmosphere in mind when i made it. It was a feeling of... leaving everything behind and embarking on an epic journey to a place of beauty and magic and wonder. Almost like a religious journey of sorts. So i guess listen to it with that idea in mind

https://soundcloud.com/seerskater%2Fgoing-south
thanks for listening
 

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Really like the concept, balance of instruments, and even the constant rhythm (which could otherwise be annoying). There are however major tuning issues. At one point it sounds like bagpipes when there are to many layers of sop all out of tune with each other.

You are right that this has potential and is very interesting, but I don't think you can ignore what's obvious and really need to sharpen/flatten your act.
 
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