I'm not sure exactly what you are asking - if it is for a critique all I can say is I likie th sound -as a producer I always appreciate a bass play who has a sound that is focussed on what's needed for the genre, and has some tightness of dynamics so doesn't a lot of extra compression or multiband.Hi !
Yes, I know it is not a bass forum but this can help me.
Sorry it is not really well played, nobody's perfect.
My bass technique is a real pleasure for creative drummers who love to shout against bad bassists.
My only beef might be it seems to be pushing a bit - I'd say relax into the beat.