Others haven't heard this as only guitar, and now that I hear the sax line with it I can't help but think that you were hearing these lines over the top the whole time. Works well, or at least you've made it work well by adding sax. The phasing is an interesting effect, but gets old quickly and has the tendency to make itself and everything else sound out of tune. Would be better (IMHO) without it. OK, I know you are a novice at guitar, but you're not a musical novice, so it surprises me to hear you get stuck in gimmick sound effect.
Underlying this there is still great talent. Just wish you'd somehow get through the learning phase on guitar. It's like watching a teenager go through puberty: nothing anyone else can do but watch and hope you get through it quickly.
Yea, it's harsh, but you know there is great respect.
