Nice take! One thing that I see and hear that you should watch out for is your breathing!
Your breathing sounds a little slow and a little shallow! If you take deeper breaths, deep into your diaphragm, it will do wonders for all of your playing! You have a nice strong color to your tone, more well supported air will bring all of that color to the forefront
I don't have any videos on hand but go on YouTube and find some breathing exercises for vocalist that focus on diaphragm breathing and support! Vocalist pay the most attention to this and they have developed some great exercises that can help anyone learn to breath deeply and efficiently
Keep it up!
Your breathing sounds a little slow and a little shallow! If you take deeper breaths, deep into your diaphragm, it will do wonders for all of your playing! You have a nice strong color to your tone, more well supported air will bring all of that color to the forefront
I don't have any videos on hand but go on YouTube and find some breathing exercises for vocalist that focus on diaphragm breathing and support! Vocalist pay the most attention to this and they have developed some great exercises that can help anyone learn to breath deeply and efficiently
Keep it up!