Nice writing and good use of movement between the piano and sax. Lovely harmonies.
The feel to me is very smooth jazz, especially your attacks. The tone is however very classical. Not sure that this is a great fit. Sounds like you are reading. If this is so loose the music. Heck you wrote it and shouldn't need to be reading. Try to feel you way through.
I think this is a really lovely piece but it could be much better played in a singing lyrical style without the "smooth jazz" clichés.
The feel to me is very smooth jazz, especially your attacks. The tone is however very classical. Not sure that this is a great fit. Sounds like you are reading. If this is so loose the music. Heck you wrote it and shouldn't need to be reading. Try to feel you way through.
I think this is a really lovely piece but it could be much better played in a singing lyrical style without the "smooth jazz" clichés.