critique

Hey all, I just uploaded a video to youtube a few hours ago and was hoping some of you could critique my playing! Anything in general is great, especially about improvisation. Thanks and happy playing. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8P3PMs4-XBA

I am 16 and have been playing saxophone for about 3 or 4 years now(10th Grade). I was just hoping some of you could help me out by giving me some feedback of my playing. Here is a High Quality video of me playing Now's The Time and Billie's Bounce: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SqsD7iggJPY I...

Hey guys, my high school big band is playing this at an upcoming provincial band festival, and the most outstanding soloist might get a scholarship... which I would like! So if anyone has any suggestions on how to improve on my feature, please let me know. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1i-MzK5951c